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Bow Mary Jane Flat Shoes, Adjustable Mary Janes, Vintage School Style, Adjustable Buckle, Thick Rubber Sole…

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Updated Oct 20, 2026

How similar products are sold

8 videos, 4 products
Usual openingStatement1 of 3 videos
Hook length3.5 sTypical
Asks to buy at0:231 of 3 videos
Video length0:10Typical
Play video0:265k views
Result first9.1 s hook
“I might have found the cutest and the comfiest flats for fall right here on the shop. They're from cider, so we know the quality is a 10 out of 10.”
Script breakdown3 parts
  1. 0:00HookI might have found the cutest and the comfiest flats for fall right here on the shop. They're from cider, so we know the quality is a 10 out of 10.
  2. 0:09DemoI grabbed these in the coffee and the wine, but they come in like 20 different colors. They have so much padding on the footbed. And yes, they do…
  3. 0:23Call to actionThey're so cute on! I'll link these below.
Cider Bow Ballet Mary Jane Flats – Cushioned Square Toe…

Hooks that opened them

  • “Only ever”Statement1.9 sWatch617k views
  • “I might have found the cutest and the comfiest flats for fall right here on the shop. They're from cider, so we know the quality is a 10 out of 10.”Result first9.1 sWatch5k views
  • “You can hate me, but we want the same thing.”Problem first3.5 sWatch660 views

Sales

Sold per dayLighter bars are averages over several days.

Bow Mary Jane Flat Shoes, Adjustable Mary Janes, Vintage School Style, Adjustable Buckle, Thick Rubber Sole, Comfortable, Perfect for Daily Wear: sold per day

Total sold

Bow Mary Jane Flat Shoes, Adjustable Mary Janes, Vintage School Style, Adjustable Buckle, Thick Rubber Sole, Comfortable, Perfect for Daily Wear: total sold

Mary Jane Shoes

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