Holipick Women's Cocktail Dresses Wedding Guest Party Crew Neck Short A Line Dress with Lace Sleeves

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Command2.6 s hook

“You need a cocktail dress, but you hate your arms. Listen up.”

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0:00HookYou need a cocktail dress, but you hate your arms. Listen up.
0:03DemoIt's not your arms, it's the camera. This is a great cocktail dress option if you do want more coverage. And I love that even the sheer part isn't…
0:20Call to actionThere is stretch to it. I think you're gonna love this one. Go grab it.

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“You need a cocktail dress, but you hate your arms. Listen up.”Command2.6 sWatch147k views

8 videos, 4 products

Usual openingQuestion1 of 2 videos

Hook length2.7 sTypical

Deal mentioned at0:051 of 2 videos

Asks to buy at1:041 of 2 videos

Video length0:49Typical

Question1.3 s hook

“Hey, you ready? Yeah, I'm ready.”

Script breakdown5 parts

0:00HookHey, you ready? Yeah, I'm ready.
0:02DemoOh, that dress. Do you like it? It's gorgeous.
0:05OfferI just got it, I, I got it off of TikTok, and it was so cheap, but I feel so beautiful. I kind of like it with the tennis shoes.
0:12DemoI thought I would just try out something different. I love it. Was it super expensive?
0:16OfferNo, it's so cheap, and the quality of it is, like, unreal. You've got to feel it's really thick. Okay, you're tall. I'm 5 8, and it fits me pretty…

Result first4 s hook

“I love it so much. I got a new dress with a new colour.”

Script breakdown7 parts

0:00HookI love it so much. I got a new dress with a new colour.
0:04DemoLet's try this on.
0:16EvidenceSo pretty. I love this dress. I love this colour. It's been so perfect for fall and Christmas.
0:26DemoI'm 40 G up here, and so look how well that fits. And right there. But I feel like you even could impression like this is without it. it just fits…
0:49EvidenceI know my hair needs to be cut so bad, but I really, really like how this fits.
0:55DemoAnd I don't have the best bra on and it still is able to, like, cover any, like, popping out issues right here because of this. I really love this.
1:04Call to actionOkay, so anyway, I'm gonna link it below for you guys because it's such a great dress and it comes in so many different colours and all the sizes.…