Women's Solid Color Slip-On Ballet Flats, Casual Comfortable Breathable Flat Shoes for Daily Wear…

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Updated Oct 21, 2026

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No. 10:51392k views

Statement4.8 s hook

“These little cloth Mary Jane slip on shoes made for the perfect little fall outfit.”

Script breakdown7 parts

0:00HookThese little cloth Mary Jane slip on shoes made for the perfect little fall outfit.
0:05DemoToday it is feeling like fall here in Eastern Kentucky, so I had to throw on all my fall colors and these are so stinking cute and so comfortable.…
0:23EvidenceI cannot get over how much I love these.
0:26DemoThey are really well made and I swear I think you could just throw these in the washer and they would be fine. They are just so stinking cute and…
0:42Call to actionI'll link these for you guys.
0:44OfferLast time I checked, these were under like $13, maybe less now I'm not sure.
0:49Call to actionBut I'll link them. Go check them out.

brooketruettSep 7

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Hooks that opened the top videos

“These little cloth Mary Jane slip on shoes made for the perfect little fall outfit.”Statement4.8 sWatch392k views

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8 videos, 5 products

Usual openingStatement4 of 8 videos

Hook length2.9 sTypical

Asks to buy at0:274 of 8 videos

Video length0:26Typical

0:465M views

Statement2.5 s hook

“Oh my gosh, I just got these shoes.”

Script breakdown6 parts

0:00HookOh my gosh, I just got these shoes.
0:03DemoAre they not the cutest ever? So I have swelling. I have edema really bad. And let me show you. I have bunions. See those bunions? And these shoes…
0:21EvidenceI know my feet are swollen, but I can wear these all day long and be so comfortable in them.
0:26DemoAnd anybody who has bunions knows how hard it is to find shoes that are comfortable and swelling like this. Look at, they're amazing, you guys. And…
0:35Call to actionI'm gonna link them in the bottom by my name. Look for coupons in the top left corner.
0:38DemoYou're gonna love them. I promise you. Give these shoes a try. I think you're gonna love them. If not, you can return them, but I can't imagine you…

ammangel7Nov 2

【Black Friday】Women's Solid Color Flats, Casual Trendy…

0:172.2M views

Result first5 s hook

“I got these so that when I go out in heel, can just put this in my purse, and then I'll have flats to wear later.”

Script breakdown2 parts

0:00HookI got these so that when I go out in heel, can just put this in my purse, and then I'll have flats to wear later.
0:05DemoThey are actually the cutest things ever. So perfect for when your feet are actually dying. You can't wear heels anymore. I can throw them in my…

julia <3May 21

Dream Pairs Women's Bow Motif Ballet Flats - Flexible…

0:18714k views

Statement3.3 s hook

“The type of shoe that an edgy and sophisticated woman can pull off.”

Script breakdown2 parts

0:00HookThe type of shoe that an edgy and sophisticated woman can pull off.
0:03DemoThe gold buckle detail on the shoe gives it the right pop of color. The block heel is made so well. This shoe is true to size for me. You could…

VictoriaNov 6

Women's Fashionable Solid Color Pointed Toe Flat Shoes…

0:3421k views

Statement1.9 s hook

“that's why I keep me my little foldables.”

Script breakdown3 parts

0:01Hookthat's why I keep me my little foldables.
0:02DemoLook, it's a little foldable booty, dude. Like this. I keep them in my purse. I'mma have them linked on the video. Cause girl, y'all know I gotta be…
0:32Call to actionI'mma have a link for you on the video.

Nilla AllinOct 23

Dream Pairs Women's Bow Motif Ballet Flats - Flexible…

0:5420k views

Problem first1.6 s hook

“Girl, I am so sick of being in pain.”

Script breakdown5 parts

0:00HookGirl, I am so sick of being in pain.
0:02EvidenceI've been on the hunt for some cute comfortable heels. That's exactly why I got these.
0:05DemoJessica Simpson the girlies have been raving about these on TikTok saying that these are so comfortable. They came just in time for my homegirls…
0:41EvidenceI got them in my person. I've been loving this bag.
0:43DemoY'all, this is the new Bella Birken is viral on TikTok. The color is bomb, perfect for fall and the size is perfect if it's everything I need. Y'all…

Nilla AllinOct 21

Dream Pairs Women's Bow Motif Ballet Flats - Flexible…

0:265k views

Result first9.1 s hook

“I might have found the cutest and the comfiest flats for fall right here on the shop. They're from cider, so we know the quality is a 10 out of 10.”

Script breakdown3 parts

0:00HookI might have found the cutest and the comfiest flats for fall right here on the shop. They're from cider, so we know the quality is a 10 out of 10.
0:09DemoI grabbed these in the coffee and the wine, but they come in like 20 different colors. They have so much padding on the footbed. And yes, they do…
0:23Call to actionThey're so cute on! I'll link these below.

Karissa AnnOct 18

Cider Bow Ballet Mary Jane Flats – Cushioned Square Toe…

0:261.8k views

Statement3.3 s hook

“I walked all around Paris in these Project Cloud ballet flats.”

Script breakdown6 parts

0:00HookI walked all around Paris in these Project Cloud ballet flats.
0:03ProblemI didn't get a blister, my feet didn't hurt at the end of the day, definitely think they passed the comfy test.
0:08DemoThey have a memory foam sole, so they really are comfy. Even have a little padding in the heel. So again, didn't bother me at all. Not to mention…
0:17Call to actionNow that they passed the walking test, I think I'm gonna have to go get them in more colours.
0:20DemoSo if you were on the fence about whether or not they were comfy, I'm here to tell you they are.
0:24Call to actionI'm gonna go ahead and drop down below so you guys can go see all the other colour options they come in.

Your Deals BestieOct 17

Project Cloud Women's | Genuine Leather Insole Womens…

0:141.2k views

Result first2 s hook

“I love shopping, tanning and celebrity gossip.”

Script breakdown2 parts

0:01HookI love shopping, tanning and celebrity gossip.
0:03DemoAlways have, always will.

⭐️Aug 28

Project Cloud Women's | Genuine Leather Insole Womens…

Hooks that opened them

“Oh my gosh, I just got these shoes.”Statement2.5 sWatch5M views
“I got these so that when I go out in heel, can just put this in my purse, and then I'll have flats to wear later.”Result first5 sWatch2.2M views
“The type of shoe that an edgy and sophisticated woman can pull off.”Statement3.3 sWatch714k views
“that's why I keep me my little foldables.”Statement1.9 sWatch21k views
“Girl, I am so sick of being in pain.”Problem first1.6 sWatch20k views
“I might have found the cutest and the comfiest flats for fall right here on the shop. They're from cider, so we know the quality is a 10 out of 10.”Result first9.1 sWatch5k views
“I walked all around Paris in these Project Cloud ballet flats.”Statement3.3 sWatch1.8k views
“I love shopping, tanning and celebrity gossip.”Result first2 sWatch1.2k views